Guilded Age » HAMMERHEAD

(circling motions with my finger) Okay…okay…wrap it up, Gravedust…wrap it uuuuup… Yep, this is the third speech Flo added to the text that I could personally do without. Everything on t...

http://guildedage.net/comic/annotated-50-32/

Generally, no matter what, you have to be true to your characters…except when you can do something decisively out of character. The nervous expression on Hammerhead and his arm floaties are...

http://guildedage.net/comic/ai-6-anno/

FB: Some faces, no words or even emoji can do justice. This page adds little to the plot…Hammerhead has spelled out his reasons for leaving, and there’s not much Penk can counter with, so w...

http://guildedage.net/comic/annotated-47-6/

FB: Sharxit. I appreciate that Penk’s political skill has not deserted him through this exchange. He’s tried to challenge land shark pride  (“Why do you flee like minnows?”) and used ...

http://guildedage.net/comic/annotated-47-5/

This one was Flo with some tweaks from me. She was really happy with the last line I added, IIRC. I also like the “practiced ease” bit: it shows Penk thinking like a tactician. And that tac...

http://guildedage.net/comic/annotated-47-4/